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The Dilemma of District 9 (Part 1)

So I finally saw District 9 a few weeks ago (I know, I know; that was so 2009 but that’s life right now; I run about a year or two behind on movies) and I’m still not totally sure what to make of it. My sister warned me of the gore (which, to my dismay, I did find a little too gratuitous at times—meaning beyond what the story really needed) and the lack of creative vocabulary (the main character seemed to forget any adjective, adverb—and verb, in some cases—other than the f-bomb). And so maybe her lack of enthusiasm countered my excitement from the positive reviews that the movie garnered upon release. There is always inherent risk in trying to evaluate a movie when expectations are not completely objective (i.e., either too high or too low). What ended up really impressing me about District 9, despite its flaws, was the story that is the film’s heart.

One of the things that I read so much about District 9 was that it was “realistic.” I always find that adjective full of irony when discussing science fiction and fantasy. I suppose that’s what we want our speculative stories to be, though, right? Realistic, aka believable. Isn’t that what science fiction is all about: expanding imagination of what’s possible without the artificially imposed limits of current scientific perception?

The technological/scientific implications of that question are for another blog post. What I think makes a story realistic (and of higher quality) is if the story can convince the reader to “suspend their disbelief” (to borrow the phrase) in both a vast and personal way.

We as readers and viewers perceive a story through our understanding of the world around us. If a story can successfully convince us that its milieu is plausible based on its own rules/laws (which may or may not be close to reality), then we can believe in that world. We are therefore more inspired, saddened, entertained, and/or left breathless by the story because what starts to matter is the people in the story. If we’re constantly baffled by the stupidity or illogic of a science fiction/fantasy milieu, how can we really believe that the situations/character of the people will be any less stupid/illogical? [As an aside, sometimes the mileu is so well developed and believable and awe-inspiring that a story of lower quality becomes even more of an annoying letdown due to the contrast; see Avatar.]

Because the milieu was realistic (at least enough), I think District 9 nailed the personal journey becomes all the more powerful. The main character, Wikus, is a relatively normal guy with a bureaucratic job. He’s not a super CIA agent with years of combat training that he suddenly remembers when he’s cornered. He’s a relatively smart yet normal guy who’s trying hard to be a good guy. And in the climax of the film, he gives into the primal human instinct of self-preservation when he betrays the prawn (alien) who he’s been trying to help. Something that the “everyman” would probably do in the same situation.

I found myself rooting for Wikus to do the right thing and being saddened when he didn’t. And the film lets Wikus run away just long enough to convince you that he really is too afraid to do the right thing because he is us, the average person trying to make it through the world. And in that situation (and in countless others) we want to believe that we would do the selfless and noble thing, but in our innermost self, we’re afraid we won’t.

And just when I wondered if it was over, when my hope in ordinary people was dashed once again, Wikus stops and turns around to do the noble, selfless, and difficult thing that we, deep down, all hope that we would do. The milieu was believable and realistic enough that the personal, tragic journey of the main character means a great deal and we end up learning a little bit about our own humanity in the process.

I think that’s the beauty of science fiction: yes, ordinary people rising above themselves to do something noble and great in an extraordinary situation—or even an ordinary one!—has been portrayed and told a thousand times. But it’s been told a thousand times because we yearn for the reminder of that possibility in us. Science fiction and fantasy allow us to look at that journey in new and different and imaginative and impossible ways so that when the choices we face seem just as impossible, maybe, just maybe we would do the right thing too.

Writing

So this blog entry is about a month overdue. Hard to believe that it has taken this long to revisit the blog. I want to give a detailed update of where the Elarra Solstice is and some thoughts on plot and character.

First of all I know that updates and notices of progress have been few and far between lately. I want to reassure you that the project is alive and well. In fact I’ve never been more excited about the project. The outlines and plans I’ve completed for revisions are really going to enrich the story and I’m excited. The biggest frustration is that I can’t wait to get to book 2 and beyond because the whole story builds and builds and right now I’m the only one that knows where it’s going. I can’t wait for readers to experience that! However I know that there will never be a book 2 and beyond if book 1 isn’t exceptional. So my current project is to make book 1 exceptional.

I’ve outlined all the changes and have detailed scene descriptions for book 1. Essentially I’m taking the backstory and making it the first chapter of the saga. I spent too much time in the narrative of what was book 1 (Whispers and Shadows) establishing the backstory that is so critical to the whole thing. Per recommendations that I received from a trusted associate, I’m extracting about 30,000 words from the manuscript as the basis for the new book 1. That leaves 80,000 to start with for what is now book 2. That also leaves me about 80,000 words to write for the new Book 1. While that is a lot of writing to do, my pace is usually about 2000 words per 90 minutes of first draft material. Now that is just the first very rough material that I usually edit about 7-8 times-a process that I really enjoy. I’ve already finished about 10,000 words of new material for book 1 and have gone through the revisions process at least four times since it is the new opening for the brook and that has to be great. So good progress is being made!

My problem right now is protecting my writing time. The last 4-6 weeks have been especially tough but that has only toughened my resolve. I want to finish my first draft of book one by July and then have something submittable by September.

So that’s the plan and I hope you enjoy the updates. They will be more frequent from here on out.

Revisions and Rewrites—a Good Thing (I promise)

I know that my updates over the last couple of weeks have not been frequent. I appreciate all of your patience! A trusted associate—who has an excellent literary eye—recently read The Elarra Solstice Book 1: Whispers and Shadows and provided me with some great feedback.

One of the recurring themes in his feedback was about the backstory that is exposited throughout the book. When discussing this, he would often say something like, “This is such a rich story: I want to experience it, not hear about it!” He proposed splitting Book 1 into two books, saying something to the effect of “You’ve already got the outline done for a new Book 1, and then you have room to flesh out these other plotlines in what will be Book 2—therefore solving your pacing problems!”

At first, this presented a daunting challenge. I’ve worked on these manuscripts a long time and I was wary of asking you to wait longer before I go through the publication process. However, after much thought, I have completed outlines for the new Books 1 and 2 and am ready to proceed forward. What this means is that I need you to be patient as I do the following things:

  • I will probably need 3-6 months to complete the rework of the new Books 1 and 2. The Elarra Solstice will then end up being a 7 book cycle. As you know, I already have completed manuscripts for Books 2 and 3 (which will become Books 3 and 4). I have also begun writing Book 4 (now Book 5). But in order to get this series onto your bookshelves, I need the first book to be the best it can be. Which is great, because in my mind Books 3 (now 4) and 4 (now 5) are where things really get going.
  • I will write a weekly blog entry so that I can focus my time on writing. I’ll keep you posted on my progress through the blog, Facebook, and Twitter.
  • Sometime next week, I will be making changes to the website to reflect the changes in my series.
  • Sometime next week, I’ll be taking down the excerpts at least until I have the new first few chapters up for you to sample.
  • I will also be moving Lindallin Snowfall into the excerpts section, and probably take it down for awhile. Several elements of that short story are now going to be integrated into the new Book 1.

I know that I’m asking you, potential readers, to wait longer for an unpublished book. All I can say is that the wait will be worth it. Stay connected by becoming a fan of the Facebook page! Follow me on Twitter for additional small updates and thoughts! And check back here weekly for the blog entry that plots my progress.

Invitation for Beta Readers to Read Manuscript for Book 1

So, The Elarra Solstice Book 1: Whispers and Shadows manuscript is at a point where I am really pleased with it. I still will have my editor, Andrew Howe, edit it one last time (this is the third draft she’ll get). But I’m ready to have some beta readers read through the entire manuscript. Let’s put it this way: this is the story that I’ll be submitting to agents and publishers starting next week. So, right now I’d like to give 5-10 people the chance to read the pre-publication manuscript.

Here’s what I need from a potential beta reader:

  • A promise to not copy or print any portion of the manuscript.
  • An effort to read through the manuscript by February 28, 2010.
  • When you’re done, send me a simple email giving me your general thoughts on what you liked/disliked. Nothing too complicated, lengthy, or time-consuming. Just needs to be done by February 28, 2010.

As a reward for being a beta reader, I will provide you with a signed copy of the published novel by the end of the year (2010). If I haven’t nailed down a publishing contract for the book by 12/31/10, I’ll use an online independent publishing company to print a book for you to have. If publishing is in the works and it’s just not ready yet, then I’ll ask you to wait for me to get my copies from the publisher.

In order to be a beta reader, I need your help in spreading the word. So, if you want to become a beta reader, please do the following:

  • Don’t be related to me. If you are related to me, email me and we’ll work something out :).
  • Have 10 (or more) of your Facebook friends go to the Elarra Solstice web site and/or Elarra Solstice Facebook Page and become fans of the page and/or followers of me on Twitter (who aren’t already doing so).
  • If you’re not on Facebook but you are on Twitter, then talk to 10 (or more) of your Twitter friends and direct them to the Elarra Solstice web site and have them to follow me (who aren’t already doing so).
  • I promise that I’ll do my best to ensure that they don’t hate you for becoming fans and/or followers, but that they’ll like what’s there and what’s coming.
  • If you’re not on Facebook or Twitter, email me and we’ll figure something out.
  • Once completed, email me at ben@elarrasolstice.com with the list of the 10 (or more) Facebook fans or Twitter followers that you helped add, and I’ll send you a PDF version of the manuscript.

Take advantage of this reading opportunity through January 29! (I want you to have an entire month to read through the manuscript before I’ll need your thoughts/comments.)

Updated Excerpts Section

After going through The Elarra Solstice Book 1: Whispers and Shadows for a thorough revision and editing, I’ve finally updated the excerpts that are available for download. I’m really excited about the subtle and refining changes that strengthen both the manuscript and the story. Here are some quick administrative notes about the changes:

  • First of all, I changed the chapter structure slightly. The Prelude chapter was long and critical to the rest of the story. In reality, the prelude was chapters 1-3 to begin with. It sets everything in motion and nothing really has as much meaning afterward if the reader skips what I was calling a prologue. So: no more prologue.
  • You may be thinking, so how come you split the prelude into the first 3 chapters, and yet there is actually less to download and read now? Well, I really considered putting the revised chapters up there so that readers who downloaded the previous versions of the chapters could download just as much and get more of the story. I even thought about adding another chapter. Then I realized I was really putting about 25% of the story up for download (26000 words). That’s like watching a 30 minute trailer for a 2 hour movie. Doesn’t make a lot of sense. Besides, the excerpts really are to capture your interest and give you a sense of what is going on and excited to read the rest. I’m satisfied at this point that the existing excerpts do that. If you’re a fan who has read the previous samples and want more…email me and we’ll work something out.
  • In addition, I’m in the process of querying agents and publishers about publishing The Elarra Solstice Book 1: Whispers and Shadows. I want to be extra sure that I’m not doing anything that could possibly infringe on publishing rights and copyright. So, I needed to password protect the downloads. It’s quick and painless: just enter your email address and click the send button to have the password sent to you. Don’t worry: your email address isn’t stored anywhere on our servers. You’ll never get any automated emails besides the one that send you the password.

All in all, I’m really pleased with the revisions and looking forward to the next several weeks as I work on the other manuscripts while querying this one to agents and publishers.

The Elarra Solstice Site is Live

I have spent the better part of a month in my very limited spare time to get The Elarra Solstice web site up and running. There are still several little things I need to finish (mainly finishing the sample stories – can’t wait to resume working on those!), but I finally have a site that should communicate effectively about the novels I’m working on.

Please feel free to leave a comment about the web site! I’m especially interested in any design issues that appear in browsers I haven’t tested. I know it works as it should in the following browsers:

  • Safari (Mac/Windows) 3.0+
  • Firefox (Mac/Windows) 3.0+
  • Internet Explorer 8.0+

My virtual machine with Windows IE 7 got blown away.

So let me know how it looks and what you like/dislike about the design/content/usability!

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